Worked today, but managed to do a bit on this in the evening. I completely re-drew the woman seated in red. She's kind of a focal point of the image and I thought I could do better. So, I did. I also decided to move one of the chairs in the foreground over a bit to the left which helps fill in a bare spot and balances the composition better. The wonders of digital art and layers. Did a bunch of little color tweaks. Right now, especially in thumbnail, it's working really well for me. This is Max's favorite place in Harvard Square to sit and I thought he might like a little of it at home.
Now those front chairs seem to point to the person in red, it does make her more the focus.
ReplyDeleteI hadn't actually noticed that. I wish I had planned it but I didn't. Well, it works out!
ReplyDeleteI think most of my best results happen by accident! It shows you have an unconscious feel for the work.
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