That third panel was a problem. Thanks, Vince for pointing it out. When I read your comment and looked at it the next day, I was really unhappy with it. So I changed the angle and redrew the whole thing. I think this works better. I especially like Crow's face in this as it has a mix of youth and weariness I was hoping for. Also, there's a slight feel of the sinister with the goblin even though he's just a waiter.
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That looks great! I think it matches the upper frames more now in tone and naturalness... is that a word?
I don't know, but I'll take it. Thanks!
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