Here's the re-draw of page two. I altered the angle a LOT from the original, deciding to go worm's eye instead of straight on. That's one thing lacking in my work, a change of angle and it's a weakness. Took photos of me for ref, though this is all freehand. I wish I could skip a step, but to get that organic feel to the lineless Illustrator image, I need to do a pencil and ink drawing then drop out the lines as a last step. Which is fine as it means I get a nifty inked drawing out of the deal. For this, though, I really like the plain color version and think it works best for the story. Why am I redrawing a story? Can't I leave well enough alone? Well, no, I can't. Why? I'm the only one I know that actually -liked- "Sound and Fury," which is reason enough to leave it alone. Thing is, I never felt like I really gave it my best shot. Now that I've found the right way to approach it, I'm going to finish it. Too bad. I can be buried with it, doesn't matter to me. It's something I feel strongly about, so I'll keep going. Besides, it's only five pages long...