Done but technically still a WIP. While I like the overall look of this, I think there might be too many words. One of the things I wanted to address with this comic was the disconnect my brain feels when I look from the image to the words. I thought by integrating them more into the art there might be less of this. Right now, it's exactly the same though without the actual balloon. So we'll see. Used a couple of intermediary layers to both unify the palette of the graffiti and to tone it all down. The crazy colors are more 'realistic,' but don't work as well. Silas as is barely stands out. I only hope this is the beginning of something bigger. Might trim the amount of text for this page down. Songs won't last long if I don't.
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