Got some work done on the next page for "City Silent' today. It's not the first page as I didn't decide exactly what I wanted when the curtain opened until I started drawing this. Still, it's a start. The colors are not final at all but might be in the right direction. One of the things Scott McCloud told me was that I wasn't drawing enough attention to Silas' head. And he's right. As it stands, the eye is drawn towards the orange. So while I want to keep a brighter night sky, I need to do something that pulls you back to Silas. And there's lettering to do. But I started, I feel good about it and that's important.