Page 25 which took too damned long to finish. Too many things got in the way, and I think I wasn't as excited about this page as I was some of the others. Structure is creeping in here and there, something that's likely and inevitable. And we do need to get to the action fairly soon or I risk losing my reader. :"D
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he wakes up drunk next to a naked man... didn't the action already happen? LOL
Heh! Mikilo's not naked; there are pants. :"D
well NOW there are, who knows if they were there 15 minutes ago? LOL
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